Blinded by the unwinking blood works of man
God lacked the essential confidence to destroy love through future past.
So forever was the fate of man:
Keep a guilty God in the lot or
Deny all relation to him.
but because knowledge doomed knowledge
This knowledge bound man to die
Hands together- ripped for eternity form God-Almighty.
The heart of man knew-
Under different circumstances God would have been just a plain saint.
But pain is the cost to loose thyself below the quagmire of truth.
He knew nothing in life was ever free.
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I like your remix. Very thoughtful and an interesting voice. I can hear you in there even though there are many of Warren's words. Excellent work. Certain diction choices give it a "preachy" tone which works well considering its content, but then that tone is put in check by your voice. There are two voices here ultimately I think. - mrs. elmeer
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